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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-07 04:52 PM


beauty walks

4’9
brown hair
brown eyes
summer sun smile

but

oh!

how time flies –

was she not
just a wee small babe?
it cannot be

years

when it seems
only
a matter
of days

yet

there she is!
innocence dressed
with laughter still pure
and a heart
that gives
and draws
a mother’s love sure

see –

beauty walks in her

s.a.t.

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-01-07 05:04 PM


Ahhh..this is lovely.
And don't they grow up fast?!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-01-07 08:46 PM


there she is!
innocence dressed
with laughter still pure
and a heart
that gives
and draws
a mother’s love sure


.
touching words, Susan...

M

Susan
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3 posted 2005-01-07 08:48 PM


thank you my friends - the look in a child's eye - that innocent sparkle - the smile of sunshine - what blessings children are-

  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Juju
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4 posted 2005-01-07 10:27 PM


I like this poem
Juju

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just out of reach
5 posted 2005-01-07 11:02 PM


Childhood goes by in a blink .... for mothers. This is lovely. hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Beki
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6 posted 2005-01-08 01:49 AM


it always did

I have two grown daughters and I can sure relate...time is passing much too quickly  now with my precious granddaughter who just turned 3 so it is timely for me now as well....good read

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-01-08 09:14 AM


my daughter is taller than me now, depending on what shoes she's wearing

oh this write really touches

Susan
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8 posted 2005-01-08 11:51 AM


It amazes me, the love one feels as a mother, a love unknown before - or that your mother should have felt this way about you -

thanks for sharing my joy and it is lovely to hear of yours

hugs -  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
9 posted 2005-01-08 12:34 PM


kewl stuff lady

email is frozen
like the snow there

makes it cold
when the gypsy fire
is behind the windows

color me warm

DavePage
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10 posted 2005-01-08 02:05 PM


Nice one.

Dave

Susan
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walking the surreal
11 posted 2005-01-08 03:52 PM


Ah D - good to see you - the ice melts upon the window from the warmth of the fire -
thank you for your hug -

Dave - thank you for your nice - it's always nice to see you peeking in -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

JL
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12 posted 2005-01-08 04:17 PM


I so enjoyed this write!
Very nice indeed!

JL

Startime55
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13 posted 2005-01-08 04:20 PM


*sigh* time passes so quickly...well said...

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14 posted 2005-01-08 06:09 PM


I enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Susan
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15 posted 2005-01-08 07:16 PM


thank you friends for the kindness of your replies -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2005-01-09 08:40 PM


Enjoyed....James
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Gaia
17 posted 2005-01-09 08:45 PM


love this
such a beautiful photo
a soul image

Susan
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walking the surreal
18 posted 2005-01-09 10:18 PM


thank you, James, for stopping by

Kacy - glad you enjoyed, and thanks for your kindness-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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