Open Poetry #34 |
Snow Flowers |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snow Flowers I study flowers grow in snow What power makes their petals glow? How can they live a freezing wake? A cold that makes my body ache I see them paint the mountain side They rise above the snow in pride Challenging the sky of blue With amber and a purple view They lay a shroud below the mist The promise of a life’s exist Inspire me a mental sew A thing that I would really know What secret did they find in strife? To build upon and make a life And this without a brain of source To navigate a faulty course I study flowers grow in snow How do they live I’d like to know? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy! I know, I know! They want to kiss the sun good morning! LOL... |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
MORNING SEYMOUR I SEE YOUR UP EARLY DAZZELING US WITH YOUR THOUGHTS AS USUAL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Then I will send you some in the form of Soulfisher Yes I'm trying to catch some of those sun sunshine was telling me about. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
flower power! love this Sy...good morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, How about a couple for you too. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I study flowers grow in snow How do they live I’d like to know?" Methinks perhaps they might be snowdrops? Lovely morning read Sy! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Inspired poem Sy. You've discovered beauty in a most extreme environment. I enjoyed this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I know of the name but naught of the aim? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Top of the morning to you, my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What secret did they find in strife? To build upon and make a life And this without a brain of source To navigate a faulty course I study flowers grow in snow How do they live I’d like to know? ----------------------------- Beause Mother Nature gives them furry boots to wear upon their floral footsy roots. I see them paint the mountain side They rise above the snow in pride Challenging the sky of blue With amber and a purple view love the imagery in this Sy-babers... we have 2 inches of the pretty white stuff this morn, yet they say its supposed to be nearly 60 tomorrow...LOL...mother nature is such a hoot. *ww* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
little fragile flowers i think not laughing at the humans shiver in their homes watching at windows, fearing the white stuff |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I read great consideration behind these lovely words - I too wonder - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I'd love to see them. Adaptability is amazing in some things, as is resilience. I loved your poem...and your heart too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I think you should find some and ask a few questions. They might give you a few pointers on snow living. Hope all is well. inkedgoddess LOL You got my point. Susan, Thanks, enjoyed your reply. Martie, Thank you sweet |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good afternoon Sy ... it is snowing hard here in the mountains and I see no flowers but the ones in your heart. It is so cold and snowy up here I wonder how anything survives. Me thinks Mother Nature wraps everything in fleece in the fall! hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, I've seen snow like that when I was stationed in Alaska. Thanks for the read. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
They grow nourished by the same love that flows from your words as you embrace their beauty...the inner vision of your heart has the same kind of beauty that we see reflected in your words...Wonderful writing... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Sy! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 A very kind reply, I thank you very much. Alli, Thank you my friend. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
What secret did they find in strife? To build upon and make a life very well said, Sey! the snow flowers could really teach us a lesson in surviving in the midst of hardships...I really enjoyed your snow flowers...too bad i have never seen snow flowers, or even snow for that matter! (but for a while you made me see them) |
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