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0 posted 2005-01-07 02:01 PM





***
        
Charmed by your smile.
Allured by your gaze.
Pacified by your voice.
Transcended by your spirit.
Intoxicated by your scent.
Vanquished by your energy.
Amazed by your grace.
Tickled by your humour.
Entranced by your thoughts.
Distracted by your silhouette.

***  
      


[This message has been edited by Nightshade (01-07-2005 03:33 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-07 02:03 PM


Beautifully captivating Chris.  This IS lovely!
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2 posted 2005-01-07 02:06 PM



Yes...you make me see sparkling
shadows of energizing powers...

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3 posted 2005-01-07 02:07 PM


Chris, this was beautiful reading, warm words that smile
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4 posted 2005-01-07 02:20 PM


BEAUTIFUL !!!  I love it Chris!!
Very well done sweet sister.  
~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~


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I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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5 posted 2005-01-07 02:38 PM


Thankyou very much ladies & hugs all round !
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6 posted 2005-01-07 02:55 PM


Yes very well done.  I like the format...very captivating indeed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2005-01-07 03:05 PM


Much enjoyed

hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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8 posted 2005-01-07 03:33 PM


scorpio & Susan, many thanks. hugs!
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9 posted 2005-01-07 06:02 PM


Beautiful write Chris! I enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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10 posted 2005-01-07 06:54 PM


Thankyou so much Alli. hugs!
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11 posted 2005-01-08 08:42 PM


I really enjoyed reading this Chris,
especially what you did with the "D".

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12 posted 2005-01-08 09:15 PM


Thankyou so much Bluesylady. Good to hear from you. hugs!!
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13 posted 2005-01-09 10:04 AM


great read first thing in the morning

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

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14 posted 2005-01-09 10:06 AM


Thankyou Snowflake!
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15 posted 2005-01-09 10:18 AM


good write
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16 posted 2005-01-09 10:47 AM


Made my mind hum...
Happiness
TD

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17 posted 2005-01-09 10:51 AM


Not only is your poem captivating, but so are you in your new photo! You look adorable!


Linda

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18 posted 2005-01-09 11:29 AM


vandana, TD, and Linda - thankyou sweet ladies. hugs!
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19 posted 2005-01-09 11:43 AM


BRAVO!!! Beautifully said...you did a great job here...

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20 posted 2005-01-09 12:55 PM


Many thanks Startime!
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21 posted 2005-01-09 08:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
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22 posted 2005-01-09 08:39 PM


Hi there James! Thankyou & Hugs!!
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23 posted 2005-01-09 08:42 PM


Now this spells one thing....in bold and
capital letters...LOVE!  Well done Chris,
and thank you for the dime...

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24 posted 2005-01-09 08:44 PM


wish I'd written it


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25 posted 2005-01-09 08:45 PM


Magnus & Kacy - thankyou so much!
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26 posted 2005-01-09 09:45 PM


You do these, so well, Chris. This is wonderful.
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27 posted 2005-01-09 10:02 PM


Thankyou sweet Sue!
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