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Walk Through Our Windows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Walk Through Our Windows Happy earth looks upon evening sea so calm & rich with vibrancy Between spirit’s light and memory brighter than any burning gold Discussing thoughts with times of old Passes, floating images, to my mind As I carefully listen in…As I listen… Path of thoughts, bear drops of sadness or harmony begins Enchanting shapes of wandering mists Her song, it long, envelopes Twilight-lawns, illumining wave of silver lights Her face, her hair, her smiles bright Bequeaths in wake of dawn Perpetual flower, the jewel goes on and on~ Then to… Fragments clearing despair, loss, suffering & pain It was, in those moments, she helped me breath again… Into the down of my soul, I know she’s youth again~ I believe In me, in breeze, in song of earthen wear…. Then love, remembers me… A countenance of care, gloved within Her many places of immortal courage her flowers living there~ Touching all childhood and aspiration… She wears, the dress of white sound, in all expression… Softened radiance…emotions ascending Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope I see her now and let her go… A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing like music floating on the wind Her music...lingering, perfume on currant Of time….of peace….of love Sinking through foundations of willfulness diminishing the interest of woeful thoughts Contemplating every aspect of life, like she so lovingly taught~ Oh…the thought of wonder, the miracle of her Without her I would not know These thoughts of memory and whispers Of adoration & inspiration I shall carry on…yes, I shall carry on… Her breath of legacy…her tender care…her even song Moving through this vein of harmony Whist happy earth looks on She smiles, with warmth of beauty Knowing change & walk through our window So evening lays warm hands of recollection and spirit lights~ Brighter, than any smoldering gold Discussing thought with time and ocean As God would have us feel and know~ Whilst, I Smile & Feel Mother’s Embracing Minerals She’s there, where er’ I go… Written for a Friend Whose Mother Recently Passed Away..... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-10-2005 10:32 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ "Touching all childhood and aspiration… She wears, the dress of white sound, in all expression…" Womderful write, good morning sweet. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very sweet sympathetic thought sweetie...well done |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There are so many lines that really touched me... excellent, compassionate write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Softened radiance…emotions ascending Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope I see her now and let her go… A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing like music floating on the wind Her music...lingering, perfume on currant Of time….of peace….of love . beautiful expressions, Lee M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Softened radiance…emotions ascending Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope I see her now and let her go… A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing like music floating on the wind Her music...lingering, perfume on currant Of time….of peace….of love" This is SO beautiful, LeeJ. It made me think of my mother, so long gone, with a smile.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Whilst, I Smile & Feel Mother’s Embracing Minerals She’s there, where er’ I go… Written for a Friend Whose Mother Recently Passed Away....." Heartfelt... JL |
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