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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-10 07:45 AM


Walk Through Our Windows

Happy earth looks upon evening sea
so calm & rich with vibrancy
Between spirit’s light and memory
brighter than any burning gold
Discussing thoughts with times of old

Passes, floating images, to my mind
As I carefully listen in…As I listen…
Path of thoughts, bear drops of sadness
or harmony begins

Enchanting shapes of wandering mists
Her song, it long, envelopes
Twilight-lawns, illumining wave of silver lights
Her face, her hair, her smiles bright
Bequeaths in wake of dawn
Perpetual flower, the jewel goes on and on~

Then to…
Fragments clearing despair, loss, suffering & pain
It was, in those moments, she helped me breath again…
Into the down of my soul,
I know she’s youth again~
I believe
In me, in breeze, in song of earthen wear….
Then love, remembers me…
A countenance of care, gloved within
Her many places of immortal courage
her flowers living there~
Touching all childhood and aspiration…
She wears, the dress of white sound, in all expression…

Softened radiance…emotions ascending
Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope
I see her now and let her go…
A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing
like music floating on the wind
Her music...lingering, perfume on currant
Of time….of peace….of love

Sinking through foundations of willfulness
diminishing the interest of woeful thoughts
Contemplating every aspect of life, like she so lovingly taught~

Oh…the thought of wonder, the miracle of her
Without her I would not know
These thoughts of memory and whispers
Of adoration & inspiration

I shall carry on…yes, I shall carry on…
Her breath of legacy…her tender care…her even song

Moving through this vein of harmony
Whist happy earth looks on
She smiles, with warmth of beauty
Knowing change & walk through our window

So evening lays warm hands of recollection and spirit lights~
Brighter, than any smoldering gold
Discussing thought with time and ocean
As God would have us feel and know~

Whilst, I Smile & Feel Mother’s Embracing Minerals
She’s there, where er’ I go…

Written for a Friend Whose Mother Recently Passed Away.....


[This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-10-2005 10:32 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-01-10 07:57 AM


LeeJ
"Touching all childhood and aspiration…
She wears, the dress of white sound, in all expression…"
Womderful write, good morning sweet.

Toerag
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2 posted 2005-01-10 07:58 AM


very sweet sympathetic thought sweetie...well done
suthern
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3 posted 2005-01-10 01:55 PM


There are so many lines that really touched me... excellent, compassionate write!
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2005-01-10 01:59 PM


Softened radiance…emotions ascending
Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope
I see her now and let her go…
A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing
like music floating on the wind
Her music...lingering, perfume on currant
Of time….of peace….of love

.
beautiful expressions, Lee

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Martie
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5 posted 2005-01-10 02:10 PM


"Softened radiance…emotions ascending
Guiding with The Dove, like eyes of hope
I see her now and let her go…
A glow of beauty, consistent & knowing
like music floating on the wind
Her music...lingering, perfume on currant
Of time….of peace….of love"

This is SO beautiful, LeeJ.  It made me think of my mother, so long gone, with a smile.  

JL
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6 posted 2005-01-10 02:28 PM


"Whilst, I Smile & Feel Mother’s Embracing Minerals
She’s there, where er’ I go…

Written for a Friend Whose Mother Recently Passed Away....."

Heartfelt...

JL



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