Open Poetry #34 |
Sunrise |
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Sunrise Before I knew the woman Beauty was your name to my heart, Etched from the moment I first saw you; But fate had other plans for your love And mocked my heartbreak with memories of your smile. My dreams promised me a favor If my thoughts spoke fondly of you, And though the years passed And time offered me gifts of beauty dressed in hope, My nightly slumber took me to real happiness Where you and I danced upon the stars Making the heavens cry purple and crimson rain, A magical scene that caused even fate to shed a tear. Time is a place of thoughts and reflection So upon the hands of time I wept, A decade of salt and what-ifs That burned a hole into the past; And there you stood expectantly, As beautiful as the morning sun, With a smile that warmed my soul. Beauty is your name to my heart Etched from the moment I first saw you; Before I knew the woman, I knew pain And before I knew love, I found patience And now... On my face your glory shines, A smile that beams of forever. Marcel |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...wow...this is so wonderfully romantic! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcel! It has been awhile... but you've come back to us, better than ever! |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
BEAUTIFUL! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh this is lovely. Quite quite lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This is fantastic! Very lovely. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can just feel you beaming |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was incredibly understanding...full of life, and the gifts bestowed you... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent write, exuding of a happy heart. Many smiles to you poet. TD |
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