Open Poetry #34 |
Mouse |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Given hour hands denote the time hourly mice fitted the rhyme heads soon rolled, decapitation extolled in the name of self-defense vengeful murders then made sense. Centuries of rodents fall in line to grandfather clock's repeated chime tails in the rhyme depicted chopped heads when men of the cloth courted instead. When men feigned blindness in jest their rumps were carved at best after a run in with a farmer's wife or a lady of the court heads were sliced by a carving knife a first and last resort! Given clocks faithfully told time one o'clock mice fitted the rhyme the hour struck, the critter dropped a farmer's wife had tails cropped heads then rolled decapitation was extolled. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a hard-hitting write here... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very intense, and good articulation...well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~~Three Blind Mice~~~ use to teach nursery school....sometimes you wonder at the words we use to sing to the young hmmmm.... Martin, You always make me think ( and some days I am just not up to it M |
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