Open Poetry #34 |
I imagine |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I imagine Standing in thigh high grass of golden gleam draping ‘cross meadow enfolding mountain crisp stream who’s gypsy dance trickle waltzes ‘cross glistening stone its sweet flow song calling me home and there above radiates the glorious summer sun blazing her lust for her blue sky love and I feel . . . I float . . . I drift away . . . upon cool kiss breeze soul released . . . into . . . Nature’s blessed ease s.a.t. Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, this is a very beautiful read. Enjoyed the ride. And where did your picture go? Wahhhh!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“and I feel . . . I float . . . I drift away . . . upon cool kiss breeze soul released . . . into . . . Nature’s blessed ease” Beyond words, just plain old beautiful poetry!! JL |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you carried me off with you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how lovely and yes, where'd your picture go? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhh, how beautifully your words drift me away...to a place unknown yet, very dear.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suzz been smokin that stuff again and didn't pass it on over to the shadow man |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Grin - thanks friends - ah yes, the photo - am thinking on that - D - come on to my house - I'm a gonna give you candy - Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Such a beautiful read. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh! Winter must be tough! But I am so glad it induced you to IMAGINE .... absolutely wonderful "trip"! Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Susan this one is beautiful! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmm - in my mind it is warm, sunny, filled with the bustle of nature's hummm and hustle - the snow is but a brief hush, a moment of waiting - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
still drifting.... stopped by to say hello and yes, write the black, tho you wear anonymity for now up in your left corner. (are you on the lam?) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful Susan!! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, that's warm.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you for your replies, friends - on the lam? Maybe Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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