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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-05 03:57 PM


I imagine

Standing

in thigh high grass
of golden gleam
draping ‘cross meadow

enfolding

mountain crisp stream
who’s gypsy dance trickle
waltzes

‘cross
glistening stone

its sweet flow song
calling me home

and    
    there      
        above

radiates the glorious summer sun
blazing her lust
for her blue sky love

and I feel . . .
    I float . . .
        I drift away . . .

upon cool kiss breeze

soul released . . .
    into  . . .
        Nature’s blessed ease

s.a.t.



Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2005-01-05 05:15 PM


Susan,  this is a very beautiful read.  
Enjoyed the ride.  And where did your
picture go?  Wahhhh!!!

JL
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2 posted 2005-01-05 07:05 PM


“and I feel . . .
    I float . . .
        I drift away . . .

upon cool kiss breeze

soul released . . .
    into  . . .
        Nature’s blessed ease”
Beyond words, just plain old beautiful poetry!!

JL

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-01-05 10:19 PM


you carried me off with you
passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-01-06 05:35 AM


oh how lovely

and yes, where'd your picture go?

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-01-06 07:16 AM


ahhhh, how beautifully your words drift me away...to a place unknown yet, very dear....

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-01-06 07:40 AM


suzz been smokin that stuff again

and didn't pass it on over

to the shadow man



Susan
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7 posted 2005-01-06 10:34 AM


Grin - thanks friends - ah yes, the photo - am thinking on that -

D - come on to my house - I'm a gonna give you candy -

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

froggy
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8 posted 2005-01-06 02:04 PM


Such a beautiful read.
Margherita
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9 posted 2005-01-06 02:07 PM


Oh! Winter must be tough! But I am so glad it induced you to IMAGINE ....

absolutely wonderful "trip"!

Love, Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-01-06 02:12 PM


Oh Susan this one is beautiful!
Susan
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11 posted 2005-01-06 03:06 PM


Mmmmmm - in my mind it is warm, sunny, filled with the bustle of nature's hummm and hustle - the snow is but a brief hush, a moment of waiting -

  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2005-01-07 08:03 AM


still drifting....
stopped by to say hello
and yes, write the black,
tho you wear anonymity
for now up in your left corner.
(are you on the lam?)

*Alli4000*
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13 posted 2005-01-07 06:21 PM


Beautiful Susan!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Sunshine
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14 posted 2005-01-07 07:45 PM



Now, that's warm....

Susan
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walking the surreal
15 posted 2005-01-07 08:44 PM


thank you for your replies, friends -

on the lam?  Maybe

Hugs -  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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