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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Caught She often throws a net of snow With winds that beat and rip and blow That jaws me with a grip of cold Each gnaw a burn of raw enfold A cat of nine tales strikes its sting That tares my skin so blood will wring And rivulets of pain extend To eat into each fibers bend Then cleans me with a sponge and bath With tears of brine devoid of wrath The touch so tender and genteel It soothes away the hurt with heal That scars that would an endless stay Just clear and seem to fade away And I am lost to clemency Just floating in its ecstasy But being made of flesh and blood How long can live a plants re-bud? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy.. You leave us with much to ponder. Well done m'friend. Pouring you a hot cup of Chai tea.  ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That snow is an ice castle today, Sy... we had freezing rain last night, and if the sun were out, we'd have diamond-studded bushes and trees... as it is, we have gray skies and slippery roads...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A cat of nine tales strikes its sting That tares my skin so blood will wring And rivulets of pain extend To eats into each fibers bend =============================== me thinks you need some *winkie TLC* and hot raspberry tea.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank's for the read and comment. Sunshine LOL we all have our troubles. vandana, Thank you for the read. JM, I can always use some TLC and winkies for sure. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this Sy...~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alli, Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always pack a punch with your ending lines I love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you dear, hope all is well. |
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