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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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whisper me rescued by your saliva grinned on my famishing I am a boatload of sponges see me capsized on purpose and pretend me worthy of your ocean and the cove there where the shuddering waits just to be the breaker's wave your hands grip metal the stainless steal stolen moments before your 6 times sin ______________ Dark (gloveless) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Pretend me worthy?? Oh come now!!  Got me humming a song.... "You didn't count on me, you were counting on your rosary" And you know the rest, what they say about sinners. *smirk* Anyway, nice write Dark one~ |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
and pretend me worthy of your ocean and the cove there where the shuddering waits *** Elegance waylays one to stop and listen to the undertow and then plead, one more time, please. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluzzzy hugs seaful one.. you always are humming something I would enjoy listening to _______________ ms elan, at least each time to be more than the last and the last to never be the last, thanks to you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - you D- I would believe would be a tsunami - and that in a very, very good way- Enjoyed this one - six times over  Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suzzz, thank you for reading and whispering hot water thoughts |
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