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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-01-01 10:30 PM

Out of the Dream

The hour had struck fast, time
So nigh to midnight,
And lone in silk sheath,
Chilled skin calling me to down

Then slipping in, I begged
Slumber to slip me nigh
Upon feathered dream…

Soon ringing chimes begin
As time began to
Wrestle me home.

You know them, you do
Standing there as time awhirls,
Hearing voices, then seeking
Choices, knowing all is
Imagining

And how will you write
The dream?

I know I try, resolved, to capture
Moments, senses, fragrance,
And in all, involve

One’s life.

What does it mean, but not to me,
To them that now live this filigree
This laced in moment of past in time,
This fragrant slice of dream
That’s mine…

For out of the dream I awake, am born
In between day’s dusk and dawn,
To carry me burdened with thoughts of you…

To step to the deck, barefoot, in view
Of blue or gray skies, it does not matter…
For this is my heart,
Full of dream, tattered…
But I would weave it all anew….

For once again, a view
Of you.

~*~

For a new friend in time.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-01-01 10:34 PM

What does it mean, but not to me,
To them that now live this filigree
This laced in moment of past in time,
This fragrant slice of dream
That’s mine…

Love this verse Sunshine. Dig it immensely. Wish I had written it. lol

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

2 posted 2005-01-01 10:55 PM

"And how will you write The dream?"
Boy, Sis a little re-arrainging and this is a good song! Mikey Like!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-01-02 01:34 AM

"Full of dream, tattered…
But I would weave it all anew….

For once again, a view
Of you.

~*~

For a new friend in time."

Awesome.....smooth as silk.

jo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-01-02 05:22 AM

...wow

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2005-01-02 10:31 AM

Beautiful, Karilea!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-01-02 10:39 AM

please, please lend me your muse!

Wonderful Karilea!! Hugs!

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2005-01-02 10:56 AM

Karilea,

I haven't been online much, and am glad to be able to steal a few moments now to find your delicate poetry. This really speaks to me, as I see it has to others! Impressive, Sunshine, but aren't all of yours? "To the library this will go, this will go, this will go..."

cathy

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2005-01-02 10:58 AM

Whoops! I can't believe I forgot to check the library box. Oh, please, don't let this be an indication of 2005! OK,, here goes...it is checked!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-01-02 11:28 AM

Beautiful beautiful Karilea...
Now I have an old song in my head...
'Out of a dream and into my heart..'
Amazing talent you have sweet lady.
Hugs~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2005-01-02 01:44 PM

Beautiful!!

Eric

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

11 posted 2005-01-02 01:47 PM

I like this one.
Its beautiful.

:-)

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2005-01-03 03:23 PM

For this is my heart,
Full of dream, tattered…
But I would weave it all anew….

For once again, a view
Of you.

Oh, yes... How very, very beautiful! *S*

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2005-01-03 05:38 PM

"You know them, you do
Standing there as time awhirls,
Hearing voices, then seeking
Choices, knowing all is
Imagining"

Yes, I know them well, Karilea...
excellent phrasing....and a great ending.

I would have to quote the whole poem in order to accent the parts that I enjoyed...

____________ice/ford
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2005-01-03 06:02 PM

Oh sigh~ this is such a gentle write, Karilea~
Loved your title, and the ending is exquisite!!

As always, you shine so bright, good poetess~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

15 posted 2005-01-03 06:51 PM

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2005-01-03 08:02 PM

Smooth as silk, Karliea.

Wishing you a happy 2005!
Corinne

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

17 posted 2005-01-19 11:01 PM

I didn't respond to this when I first saw it....I love being enigmatic, so I'll let you guess why....(how'd I do?)...

This poem is beautiful, and it handles a fragile subject so gently....

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

18 posted 2005-01-19 11:03 PM

Full of dream, tattered…
But I would weave it all anew….

For once again, a view
Of you.

MAGICAL and ENCHANTING

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