Open Poetry #34 |
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after four in five |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
the snow there on that side of 33 teasing my eyes as I stand here at rincon and shiver my skin I hear you as the wind laughing at my fragile even in the leather you tempt my fasteners with chill and leave the prints after purple on pale like the ink of my tattoos you say you make your own and they are invisible except at this time of year when you visit as the death does the flowers in ojai and as the ice moth does the roses at el rio but then there is my laughter and you wear it in your tunnels under the mountain as my iron gallops me to some warm sided sin at a saintless santa barbara |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
at a saintless Santa Barbara... ride the roads well, and safe and have a wonderful New Year... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
damn **just me** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is so incredible - the words you work, the images you stir, the life you give to her breath - you write nature so well- Damn D- there are times when I am just left in awe of your talent- Hugs - Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
something different here...about this one nice |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
leather soft and weathered like his smile stiffens from rincon's salty breath as he pulls the long black ribbon from santa barbara's hair. Mmm... road trip. Indi |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this... ![]() ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
very passionately written...i love how you blend your words ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write ![]() |
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