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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-12-19 02:32 PM

I am here among you, lost in silent and soft
remember of passing moments,
of traveling times yet to be before my eyes.

I am there, standing  in the shadow of a great oak,
watching the crispness of a  sun in morning rise.

I am beating within your pulsing chest, as blood
mightily courses your every vein.

Lost in temperate moments, in unrest...of
daily struggles which I must restrain.

I am within your feathered pen as ink flows dark upon
a fresh clean page. Waiting to speak,
to take a snow drift walk...to have a moment's engage.

I am where the budding flowers bloom, where daisies
and daffodils play. The unseen flowing breeze that touches
your room,  the shadow lingering, wanting simply to
just stay.

I am ... yes... I am..

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-12-19 02:36 PM

Hi Barry!

I'm so glad to see you!

"I am where the budding flowers bloom, where daisies
and daffodils play. The unseen flowing breeze that touches
your room, the shadow lingering, wanting simply to
just stay.

I am ... yes... I am.."

A very touching poem, my friend. I hope you are well and that you have a wonderful holiday time with your family.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-19 02:42 PM

Hello Barry...how beautiful this is.
I have missed reading you.
I'd like to wish you and yours the best of holidays!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Season's Greetings!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-12-19 02:46 PM

You are...yes,,,you are! ~ Three times over and in spades, Dear Omnipresent One! lol

Love & Christmas Lights,
Linda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-12-19 03:41 PM

Mmmmm - Barry - this is so softly you - beautiful -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-12-19 03:44 PM

How very beautiful dear Barry!

I AM permeating everything ...

Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-12-19 03:54 PM

Oh yes you are sweet friend, this an much more. Good to see you in living color.
TD

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-12-19 08:08 PM

Ah, how refreshing it is to read you again.
This is lovely indeed. hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2004-12-19 08:29 PM

Enjoyed this positive write Barry!!

believe in what your heart feels...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2004-12-20 04:48 AM

i've missed your most enjoyable writings

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-12-20 05:25 AM

indeed you are...and how grateful I am

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2004-12-20 03:53 PM

Beautiful write Barry! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-12-20 04:45 PM

nice words

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-12-21 01:56 PM

I like this very much, my friend... I kept trying to choose my favorite part... and though there are some lines I identify with more than others... the whole is beautiful! *S*

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2004-12-21 02:15 PM

Beautiful write!

Eric

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

15 posted 2004-12-21 02:26 PM

Nicely done! You are a pleasure to read, sir! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

16 posted 2004-12-31 08:00 PM

Hi, BJ! Been awhile, huh? Just had to find one of yours to read tonight. This was lovely!

Happy New Year!

....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (12-31-2004 11:18 PM).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

17 posted 2004-12-31 08:03 PM

Love every part of this one, Barry, but these lines are my favorite:

I am within your feathered pen as ink flows dark upon
a fresh clean page. Waiting to speak,
to take a snow drift walk...to have a moment's engage.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2005-01-01 10:15 AM

Happy New Year Barry

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

19 posted 2005-01-01 10:17 AM

I know I read this when it was posted,
but thanks to Dixie, I can now fix
my faux pas and answer accordingly!

Happy New Year, Barry!

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

20 posted 2005-01-02 12:37 PM

much enjoyed

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

21 posted 2005-01-03 11:03 AM

good write

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