Open Poetry #34 |
In All Written Languages |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In All Written Languages These slipstreaming lines archaic now, but never so archaic that someone cannot read them, they visited me last night, fled into my dream and harbored within, among the warm. I saw their lovely shapes again, curves and lines and back askance slash all black against white struck just so, Gregg would have been pleased, and they danced around me, slipped, were they, the loss of a letter or two, still, their meaning so clear but so frenetic their dance, so joyful in step to read the meaning of their appearance almost almost escaped me… I saw then a dot closely over the smallest o then a great curve like the hump of an elephant, widely over then back around a larger O then swerving down and back, like a scimitar’s curve in its hilt. He Gave I have changed my last name three times since I left my past but still, just as if I had carved those words then, I would find them even now, in some rock caved wall or on some granite stone in a graveyard too near and the dream stays close that no one lives forever, and in some way all have given to some degree, but none like Him. No, none like Him. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine A lovely and thoughtful write. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I have seen Gregg referred to as "pothooks" in some forgotten potboiler. Those swirls are now gone, but indeed, not Him. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My goodness, I wish I had your talent Karilea !! This is awesome. Methinks that Annabelle is pouting somewhere. Is she with you ? hugs, Chrislane ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea...just beautiful! Congratus on your milestone.. and all the best to you in 2005~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write! Happy New Year! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Exceptionally potent and beautiful...and once again, many congrats sent your way, keep penning for us Lady, you've volumns to say... Hugs Lee J. |
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