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milkweed
Junior Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 42
fields of gold

0 posted 2005-01-01 02:41 AM

You can’t deny it,
     the flow of energy
     charging us
     with bliss,
     spontaneous touch
     and absentmindedness.
You try to hide it,
     but the glow of you
     reveals
     the mutual attraction
     my presence always
     feels.
Another year now passes
     each of us alone.
Yet when we are together
      it’s like we have a home.
Why can’t we move beyond this
      into that sacred shrine,
      take up permanent residence
      in mirrored love sublime?
Why can’t we change reality
  to fit our needs tonight?

I’d bend a thread of time for you,
Just tell me that you’re mine.

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2005-01-01 02:43 AM

oh, so sweet...welcome to passions!

milkweed
Junior Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 42
fields of gold

2 posted 2005-01-01 02:45 AM

Thank you, J.Samm. It is nice to have a place to vent. Happy New Year to you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-01-01 09:07 AM

I’d bend a thread of time for you,

~*~

Now that's a line I wish I had written...
well done...

and if this is a vent? Do more, please!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-01-01 09:13 AM

milkweed
WEll if he's not a tumble weed he should take you up on the offer. Well done

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-01 10:05 AM

a beautiful write
much enjoyed

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-01-01 11:37 AM

nicely done, milkweed! very nice indeed! Wishing you a bright new year...
miscellanea

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2005-01-01 12:01 PM

What a beautiful write.
TD

milkweed
Junior Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 42
fields of gold

8 posted 2005-01-01 01:58 PM

Sunshine, Seymour, PS, Misc, TD, thank you all for reading and thank you for your encouragement. Seymour - lol re the tumbleweed.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-01 04:51 PM

I enjoyed this! Happy 2005!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-01-01 05:38 PM

this is well done - emotive - touching-

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-01-01 05:41 PM

Why can’t we move beyond this
      into that sacred shrine,
      take up permanent residence
      in mirrored love sublime?

Beautiful!!!!

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