Open Poetry #34 |
Boxing Day 2004 (I had no idea this was going where it -landed-) |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Boxing Day 2004 ink spilled onto parchment swirls its sorrow leaves blemishes of a diarist’s pain speaks the message the strain could not maintain a refrain of agony untold but spilled in bold flares the where’s and wherefores of loss of the tossed, shaken, stirred, blurred~ and only dna may reveal the deal made and for whom the sea has spoken ©December 31, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
i like your style of short, snappy lines...well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
much thought happened from reading this... i like where your words fell. nice job. ~snow "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this!! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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