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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-12-31 08:13 PM





Don this Cusp

Beneath this waning moon, I shall
stand naked in its pale stark flash,
waving off past’s dark, to meet, yea,
some coming light, a moment before one last tick
reaches into this next year’s tock,
to clock all and receive tall, then
enter sweet new year’s embrace…

I shall don this cusp, with all its trappings,
brief though fey magic may be, that
come the dawn, pronouncements
of good import shall be known to me, and thee;

that these gifted, bare journals
shall consume all curves and carvings of ink;

I shall renew this register, to receive
my cache of beloveds;

then with doggedness, resolve me I
to take bolder steps,
and even more…

visit again my indigenous shores…scatter feed
and seed for birds to come,
that a feather may be shared with love,

pay heed more intently to voices
forever gone;

then hone my own           strong,         inner song…
and take your hand in mine;

Come soon, dawn, for I shall
have slipped off the dress of cusp
from yesterday’s lesson,
and hold with trust

that this New Year shall forever be,
a time to strive toward poetry.

~*~

Happy New Year, my Friends, and Poets, with a huge Thank You, to Ron.
Karilea


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

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1 posted 2004-12-31 08:29 PM


Karilea/sissie

You're going to be cold...let me put my arm around you.  A lovely poem of new beginnings, especially like the part about the feathers, but you knew that.  


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2 posted 2004-12-31 09:11 PM


Simply awesome write Karilea!!
Happy New Year Hugs, Chrislane

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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3 posted 2004-12-31 09:12 PM


Wow (awestruck) this is really good sis
J.Samm
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4 posted 2005-01-01 02:46 AM


some coming light, a moment before one last tick
reaches into this next year’s tock,

great choice of words...fun too! enjoyed

milkweed
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5 posted 2005-01-01 02:49 AM


"visit again my indigenous shores…scatter feed
and seed for birds to come,
that a feather may be shared with love,

pay heed more intently to voices
forever gone;

then hone my own           strong,         inner song…"

Beautiful words, Sunshine.  Happy New Year to you!

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6 posted 2005-01-01 09:09 AM



Beneath this waning moon, I shall
stand naked in its pale stark flash,
waving off past’s dark, to meet, yea,
some coming light, a moment before one last tick
reaches into this next year’s tock,
to clock all and receive tall, then
enter sweet new year’s embrace…

sounds like  you captured a moment in time
and made it stop just for you to touch

scorpio
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7 posted 2005-01-01 09:32 AM


Happy New Year Karilea.  Thanks for sharing your inner songs with us.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2005-01-01 03:11 PM


"Come soon, dawn, for I shall
have slipped off the dress of cusp
from yesterday’s lesson,
and hold with trust

that this New Year shall forever be,
a time to strive toward poetry."

Wonderful Karilea!!  Happy New Year!!!

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9 posted 2005-01-01 04:33 PM


Happy New Year!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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