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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-27 09:01 PM


He never knew why the wild wind took him
He never knew why he rebelled
He never knew of playing away
He never knew why he must be away
He never knew why he left
He never knrew why be fought not to return

He never knew
The family blood matched their words
"O"
And he was a
"B"


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-12-27 09:06 PM


This is so intense, dear Dave!

Maybe now he knows? Awareness dawns? In letting go there is peace.

Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-12-27 09:25 PM


Margherita

Maybe it is the only way I know how to write.

An Angry Poet I suppose I am.

The knowledge starts at the beginning.

He doesn't learn until he is a great deal older and then he is never told until he knows it in words, when he is then told what he knows.

In the interval he is just told in the soul.

regards

Dave

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3 posted 2005-01-01 01:05 PM


... when he is then told what he knows.

~*~

The things some of us know inherently,
are sometimes too much to bear
for others.

I know this poem.

Thank you, Dave.

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4 posted 2005-01-01 03:27 PM


Excellent. Nodding in agreement here with the others. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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5 posted 2005-01-01 04:33 PM


Awesome write Dave.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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