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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-31 06:32 PM


People moved as we circled intent on a dance
Eyes liked crescents daring an advance
Showing all we held in reserve on a judgment day
Moving like two skunks as everyone moved away

Dancing on a rhythm breakfasting on meat
Movement getting closer whispers in the heat
Fog within our feet light within our eyes
Dancing in our veins

And then we found sunrise

Have a Great 2005

Dave

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-12-31 06:42 PM


Much enjoyed this, Dave.  Happy 2005 to you, too!   ......jo
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2 posted 2005-01-01 08:56 PM


I hope that you have a great New Year Dave!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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3 posted 2005-01-02 01:46 PM


Starting the year on a powerful note with this one Dave.

Great write.

Eric

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4 posted 2005-01-02 02:43 PM


I am just me, everyone.

Don't know how to be anyone else.

Have a Great One.

Dave

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