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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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2004 the last notes fade in soft tone seranade sorrowful in a way at the passing ‘twas a lively tune at times Like cloggers jumping Heels clicking In riotous noise Then the cadence would slow And the sweet pause of silence Would wrap in comfort shroud The world weary notes Only to find a jig Joining merrily with some jive Tumbling into bee bop rhythm Cajoling the complacent to move And always, there Just behind the curtain Stands the blues awaiting With cool hues dripping Come, accompany me In final expression Let’s join our voices In boisterous appreciation Of another year Bowing out most gracefully Can you hear? The fat lady sings . . . s.a.t. Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm beginning to hear her! Susan, this was an excellent poem. I loved the change in meter with the different types of music.  ........jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, we should all look back with appreciation as we listen to the fat lady sing. Lovely write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Music to my ears! A refreshingly unique poem! I enjoyed this, Sparkles! What a disappointment to see that your beautiful Mona Lisa photo has been removed! I really liked seeing it when I read your poetry! Havahappyhappy New Year! Loves 'n hugs, Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I just love that ending! wonderful piece Happy New Year Susan |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like it was a whirl of a ride happy 2005  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I really enjoyed this read. Happy New Year |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you dear friends - and new Year hugs to you all - It was the year of the Monkey - glad he is heading back into the trees   Love all - SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Happy New Year Susan!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I am not one to celebrate New Years...but you paint a lovely picture Susan. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lovely picture painted in spite of the harsh backdrop of reality in some places... enjoyed, Happy New Year |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - and I pray you will all enjoy a better year with joy and love in 2005. Hugs - SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
P E A C E and L O V E in 2005, Susan... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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