The Sun’s But A Pale Star Next To Thy Eyes

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Open Poetry #34

The Sun’s But A Pale Star Next To Thy Eyes

EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2005-01-01 10:30 PM

The Sun’s But A Pale Star Next To Thy Eyes

I love much that the world has to bestow,
The green of spring, summer's laughter, and snow,
For there's naught but joy within all I see,
Yet 'tis beauty beloved that bringeth glee.

O' the velvety night doth tug at heart,
The weave of the planets seem works of art,
They spin upon their elliptical course,
Held in place by gravitational force.

Still the stars draped upon the ink-stained veil,
Seem merely fine jewels in some old wives' tale,
I gift thee the Pleaides to pin in hair,
They're diamonds birthed in a fire twice rare.

Let them glint and glow like new fallen snow,
Quickening my heart 'til from head to toe,
I'm lighted as if by a thousand spheres,
Then I’ll know beatitude through all the years.

The sun’s but a pale star next to thy eyes,
And love your eyes I’d sensationalize.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sunshine

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1 posted 2005-01-01 10:32 PM

O' the velvety night doth tug at heart,
The weave of the planets seem works of art,

~*~

Kevin...these are some wonderful lines,
and I wish I had thought of them myself...

for indeed, the night sky is the soul sky....

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

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desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2005-01-01 10:53 PM

it's been too long since we've bounced words off of one another... loving this so much, kevin.... *hug*

as for the ink... but of course :-)

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

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Michigan

3 posted 2005-01-01 11:32 PM

Very beautiful but of course you always did
have that talent. One of many I might add.

;-)

Amour Vous Always

Within this heart you'll find love

TexUS
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since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

4 posted 2005-01-02 12:18 PM

That was quite breathtaking, your muse is a lucky lady!
Awesome write, thanks

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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5 posted 2005-01-02 12:47 PM

What a lovely title - what a lovely, romantic thought - and your pen puts such lovely prettily to paper - well done

susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-01-02 05:28 AM

you romantic devil

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