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Hence, Silken Fresh
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Hence, Silken Fresh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I read somewhere about simply placing thoughts, feelings down on paper, as if it were a bad thing...I think not...and that's what I do It is the Shamen of travel...the mind is, what it eats... And so the ambient of mind and spirit Human spa moods Slant of illumination sequence In mind…. Swirling flesh Red lipped hours Embrace white passages In cool trickle of self made meadows Sallow bended knees Identify technique Fortune-teller of opened doors Powers clairvoyant gaze Mastery of virtuoso Dew drop mind, sealed Still with me here Implicit content Solemnity of mystic Peering One’s nature Immensity of origin…compass I am afternoon’s of winter The luster of warmth Vigorous cathedral tunes Images of quietude Holding my breath For the final image Reflecting in landscapes listening Oh, poignancy handles sight Childlike expression Embracing the whole of body Sweet the words of earth And sea Sea of multi-faced identity Perennial linger Sun mug of uncertain happiness Tutorial of foliage knows Those who dream I am mortality I am one with desire Oh perfect sky Endless moments Strewn the imagination of art Ritual charm I am the dead plant which rots Ever stronger waters Certainty is the speaker’s motivation Body of will Semblance of phenomenon Ironically, yet to fill Drawing close my coat of thought Where cheers pleasure spirits Crowned vine of store Where songs of summer Become companionship for winter poems |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh yes! Do you "Howl"! This poem is meant to be read outloud......~P |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Glowing, marvelous poetry! Very, very nice Lee J. JL  |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
I agree with Choshi... this should be read aloud, often, and in a strong voice. You digest your food very well. |
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