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Just between you and me
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Just between you and me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I want to feel the world slip away that moment when your eyes find mine and touch me like no other when your smile says, ‘I know you’ I want to hold you close to me from across the room and know you feel me I want to watch you watch me and see your eyes catch fire when you hear my soul softly sigh, ‘I love you’ I must admit I’ve always enjoyed other people watching us as they try to interpret the aura and envy the electric emotions they know are there but cannot understand it is a language they will never speak... ~SEA~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is so very, very good! Am in love with it   SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A beauty!! Depiction of true love to be emulated. Excellent write SEA. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when you put it like this I wonder if they all know how it feels enjoyed this ms |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, That aura might melt the moon! Well done... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ How very, very touchingly lovely is this~ Sweet girl ... you know that this one knows me~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely ... Yes, I guess all lovers have different secret codes to communicate ... It's the language of the heart. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Susan~Much enjoyed. In the midst of winter, |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very Very Nice!!! Much enjoyed! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Sea! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice poem, Juju |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that ending! the whole poem is excellent! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I want to watch you watch me and see your eyes catch fire when you hear my soul softly sigh, ‘I love you’ beautiful SEA. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Got something special there, alright! Happy New Year, SEA! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
SEA, Even from across the room, so to speak, I admire the eye language that you both share and the romanticism found therein and even though I can't fully interpret it, as your poem explains, still, I think you covered it very very well with the three simple words... 'I love you.' Again, very enjoyable reading. -Bob |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Indeed, it seems only a very few fortunate souls have that very hidden connection... it's amazing when they don't set the room ablaze! Wonderful, m'dear! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I want to watch you watch me and see your eyes catch fire when you hear my soul softly sigh, ‘I love you’" I loved that part . . . beautiful write SEA! Happy New Year! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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