inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-12-30
01:02 PM
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Kiss of rain upon you,
the fusion of heaven with all below,
let me wrap you, a newborn, swaddled in the mist of morning's found constellations,
lamentations of spring affairs, now whistle windswept in lavendar embers,
drink me down;
in scarlet wine,
my chrysalis broken by the knowing eyes of your bare extremities,
sip me slowly in a love tonic, as your boots bolt to december's muddy knoll,
let me simmer gentle and warm to nourish the inside your ancient soul.
(inspired)
[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-30-2004 04:57 PM).]
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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
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2004-12-30
01:04 PM
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Very nice, smooth read. Enjoyed.
JL
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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
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posted
2004-12-30
01:09 PM
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something virgin seeping through sensual sighed sin sipped
enjoyed it inky one
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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posted
2004-12-30
01:33 PM
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"sip me slowly"
may we all be sipped slowly..or slowly sip..
"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-12-30
03:19 PM
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Very nice - and that ending - you write lovely
SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2004-12-30
04:29 PM
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Mmmmm lovely Michele...much enjoyed!! Hugs~In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer.
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2004-12-30
05:53 PM
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let me simmer gentle and warm to nourish the inside your ancient soul.
Fantastic!
Love and hugs. Margherita
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*Alli4000*
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
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posted
2004-12-30
07:18 PM
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Great write! I like this...
~Alli~Happy Holidays!
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Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
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2004-12-31
05:51 AM
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lovely imagery, enjoyed
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2004-12-31
06:07 AM
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Oh, how I love to read your "inspired" poetry. There is even more of your passionate soul in them!
Love & Light, EA May you have a joyous new year!
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-12-31
07:12 AM
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thanks for sharing my kiss have a happy
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2004-12-31
07:27 AM
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slow is always good
thank you for your warmth and happy new year to you
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bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
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2005-01-02
08:30 AM
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enjoyed
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2005-01-02
11:07 AM
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thanks dix bboy 2 florida kids glad you came by
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