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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-12-29 05:54 AM

art by: ricardo acevedo

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-12-29 06:57 AM

Love it! Love the artwork too. Just getting ready for work here and popped in to read a poem. Glad I chose this one to be my morning read. Got to go--running late! LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2004-12-29 08:02 AM

can feel some lace
with the price tag
still attached in this one

kewl stuff ms

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-12-29 08:14 AM

Snow
"and though you pulled and knoted the tongues truth" Is that the string you pull and the whole garment falls apart? Good write enjoyed the read.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-12-29 04:58 PM

kevin... lol stop looking for poems when you should be getting ready for work! *s*

~~~

i appreciate the time you all take to read me, even when i post poems such as these. which truly, the only way one would understand them is if you were inside my mind. i hold true to my belief that not all poetry NEEDS to make sense to the reader, in a black and white way.... but that you took the time to even try to understand... or that some how my words affected you.... does help me to think, i did something right.

thank you!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-12-30 02:19 PM

Very nice write indeed.

JL

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-12-30 02:21 PM

I so enjoy your work!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-12-30 06:26 PM

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-01-01 11:00 PM

Nope I am not done bouncing your stuff back to the top milady. Let them suffer another read for it is what I wish. LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2005-01-01 11:12 PM

LOL. kevin... well far be it from me to tell you to read something else... *smirk*
i am thrilled that you DO like what i write (you would tell me ... if you didn't .. right??? )

thank you all so much for the supportive comments.

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-01-02 05:27 AM

very cool

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