Open Poetry #34 |
singing silent; strange request |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
art by: ricardo acevedo "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it! Love the artwork too. Just getting ready for work here and popped in to read a poem. Glad I chose this one to be my morning read. Got to go--running late! LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can feel some lace with the price tag still attached in this one kewl stuff ms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snow "and though you pulled and knoted the tongues truth" Is that the string you pull and the whole garment falls apart? Good write enjoyed the read. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
kevin... lol stop looking for poems when you should be getting ready for work! *s* ~~~ i appreciate the time you all take to read me, even when i post poems such as these. which truly, the only way one would understand them is if you were inside my mind. i hold true to my belief that not all poetry NEEDS to make sense to the reader, in a black and white way.... but that you took the time to even try to understand... or that some how my words affected you.... does help me to think, i did something right. thank you! "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write indeed. JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I so enjoy your work! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Nope I am not done bouncing your stuff back to the top milady. Let them suffer another read for it is what I wish. LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
LOL. kevin... well far be it from me to tell you to read something else... *smirk* i am thrilled that you DO like what i write (you would tell me ... if you didn't .. right??? ) thank you all so much for the supportive comments. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool |
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