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though in her love
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
damn gal.. I needed to read this today... your words touch me. Very well done. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
wow you're quick *S* (((hugs))) i'm glad i could share something that has touched you.... thank you "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...I sneaked in quick and it was just posted.... and yes, you did touch me gal this was something I so truly needed to read today.... big exhale.... thank you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are a woman with amazing talent.. love this one Snow. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
and you nancy, are very kind. thank you so much. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms snow.. another 'damn' for madame poetess enjoyed your skin bare heart side here |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all the above. The read was an adventure. Excellent. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
I really REALLY Love your stuff! You yake my breath away. I can nearly gear your voice in a soft hush of a whisper. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
though in her love she is quiet... this touches |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nice - love the fresh imagery here |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Snow, Great poem here. I really like this one. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
(does anyone really come back to read thank yous ... i wonder ) anyway... d...you are too kind, but i like it :-) thank you!! *K* jl, thank you very much! alli, aww, thanks sweets. dixie.... i'm glad it does hon. beki...thank you so much! froggy, i'm happy you do. thank you!! brad....you... make me blush. thank you very much for your sweet words. happy new year... ~S "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh yeah. This is a great piece and is going back to the top of the list. Does anyone come back to read thank-you's? Mmm sometimes I look at poems again. If I go back for a second read I usually quickly scan for a reply...but they are not really important. You work Snow is simply breath taking. Love each and every word. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"deadcherry wood" -- wow, I love this analogy ... and I'll display it in my library! |
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