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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-12-28 04:42 PM


Tsunami

Few of us knew until this week
A tsunami's might.
An ocean earthquake brought no fear;
It wouldn't see the light.
We had no thought that waves would come
To take so many lives;
Sweeping babes from mother's arms
And husbands from their wives.

Thousands upon thousands gone,
Too much to comprehend.
Armageddon for the ones
Who died before its end.
How puny are man's efforts
When God shows His true power.
We only know we must prepare
For that momentous hour.

By: Joyce 12/28/04

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1 posted 2004-12-28 05:00 PM


The devastation is horrendous Joyce.
The loss of life..umbelievable.
Nature in all its fury.
A well written timely piece.
Thank you for this.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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2 posted 2004-12-28 05:04 PM


How puny are man's efforts
When God shows His true power.
We only know we must prepare
For that momentous hour.

~*~

Yes, it all reminds me of the mythical Atlantis, and how all of the city was devastated by "a tidal wave" which we now call Tsunami.

Thank you for the memorial, Joyce.

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3 posted 2004-12-28 05:19 PM


"...One will be taken and the other left..." ... this came to my mind while reading your poem, dear Joyce.

May we be ready, yes! May love rise in our hearts ...

Thank you for your compassionate words.

Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2004-12-28 05:20 PM


Joyce,
   After reading this, it has put my day in perspective, "Be thankful for what and who you have, living each day to the fullest."

   A very well written, poem that shows such caring

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5 posted 2004-12-28 05:39 PM


Thank you dear friends for reading.  My heart and thoughts are with those devastated lands.  Love, Joyce
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