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cool blue river
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cool blue river |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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this river runs in shades of blue with under currents of the cool of you and I shiver ‘tis my own doing this frost flow ice from my own cold kiss of thinking twice and I quiver silver shimmer falls in liquid regret chilling to snow masking barren breast and I weep this river of the cool of you s.a.t. of note - this I wrote a bit ago - it does not reflect my current state of mind, but I liked very much the flow of it - Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well right now, the river is more likely a place for throwing one particular man i know into without a lifejacket but i like this a lot when i feel more serene |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Awesome write. Enjoyed the sound and feel of this one.  Thanks! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like the flow of it too... well done ladypoet |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, you truly are a wonderful poetess!  May your world now be merry and bright! Loveya! Linda |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Susan! Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - it is nice to feel your warmth in all my colors - inkked one - I understand - perhaps we both need to be on a beach in Tahiti where blue is a much prettier color   SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
susan, you're my kind of gal.......now saddle us up a couple of boytoys, some hawaiian tropic #4, and unlimited pina coladas, and i'm there |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...and you should like it...very, very well written...in content and thought. jwesley |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...!!!! Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"silver shimmer falls in liquid regret chilling to snow masking barren breast"  love that stanza... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, this is beautiful. I love the flow of it, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
tis my own doing this frost flow ice from my own cold kiss of thinking twice Interesting the way you delivered the message....good! *S* ~Atov |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Yes, it does have a nice flow. It is one hit after another. Enjoyed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Many thanks dear poet friends - I am very pleased that you've enjoyed this little piece - your replies warm me- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'm very glad you posted this. At one time or other, I have related to all of this. It is as if you knew my heart. Wonderful writing and a nice addition to my library. miscellanea |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your poem truly flows. Intentional pun. Joyce |
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