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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-12-26 12:02 PM

It echoes my own pattern,
designing my walls
with a vine of both
roses and lacerations
stenciled side by side,

i seem to have acquired
a flair for it by now,
harkening to the charm
of its still irrestible call,

the heart births a sparrow;

then seeks insulation
when emptied again
of the spark that
set its wings asunder,

never as joyous,
than at the captured moment
before realization,
that its going to break
all over again.
**********************************************

sunday, the day after christmas 2004

(and i feel the trees shivering as i circle
the runner's trail)

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-26-2004 12:42 PM).]

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-12-26 03:11 PM

Feel this one - least your out doing something good for the soul - can't stand the cold, myself, so I find myself huddled in the house -

Hope you find your blue lightens to the bright sight of sunny summer sky days -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-12-26 05:12 PM

Wow.

Still sitting here thinking - WoW!

Powerful piece of art, my friend.

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-26 09:18 PM

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-12-26 09:43 PM

those blues sure can take a hold...

hugging the shivers making way for warmth

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-12-27 08:02 AM

ms inky
blue has a special feel to it
like warm water
that you can get into all the way

familiar feel

enjoyed this piece

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-12-27 08:17 AM

inkedgoddess

It echoes my own pattern,
designing my walls
with a vine of both
roses and lacerations
stenciled side by side,

Never known it different, enjoyed.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-12-27 08:29 AM

"the heart births a sparrow;

then seeks insulation
when emptied again
of the spark that
set its wings asunder,

never as joyous,
than at the captured moment
before realization,
that its going to break
all over again"

yep...every time..such disappointment...

me too.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2004-12-27 09:46 AM

It echoes my own pattern,
designing my walls
with a vine of both
roses and lacerations
stenciled side by side,

i seem to have acquired
a flair for it by now,
harkening to the charm
of its still irrestible call,

Michele, beautiful writing, sweet Lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2004-12-27 11:18 AM

"the heart births a sparrow"

~ What lovely and expressive words.
I don't think that I shall ever forget them!

May your blue turn to loving pink in 2005, Poetessa Goddessa.

EA

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

10 posted 2004-12-27 11:30 AM

From lost love to lost loved ones,
The blues can take us down.

I enjoyed your painting of your mood. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

~eternal child~
Junior Member

since 2004-11-23

Posts 31

11 posted 2004-12-27 05:38 PM

the blues..

how they linger...

enjoyed

~ec~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2004-12-27 05:54 PM

Wow...I'm speechless.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

13 posted 2004-12-28 01:14 PM

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2004-12-28 03:19 PM

the heart births a sparrow;

then seeks insulation
when emptied again
of the spark that
set its wings asunder,

love this Inky and the way it spoke to me.

mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2004-12-28 05:31 PM

One thing is sure: your blues gave birth to a very impressive piece of poetry, dear Michelle!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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