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gemjop
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0 posted 2004-12-28 01:02 PM



Your eyes came back to me
~out of season~
butterflies of summer
from winter wander

a smile thawed
at nothing but moving glass scenery
and they danced
wings on fire
to stomach-pit

and it didn't matter

you weren't there

or anywhere near.



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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-12-28 01:07 PM


"Your eyes came back to me
~out of season~"


Freakin' A!  Outstanding!

  Hi Gemma!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-12-28 02:06 PM


Wow gem,
what Susan said...
and brava...

I never have enough of time to read here in the pages of blue and am grateful for catching your work when I have time enough to linger .

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2004-12-28 02:38 PM


ma'am....

  your words have always been able to move something in me...

I sure enjoy reading them...

very nicely done ma'am.. very nice indeed..

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-12-28 02:42 PM


Hi LittleOne!!
It's so good to see you!!
And, I see, you're still writing
excellent and beautiful poetry!!
Heart hugs, my friend,






Dark Angel
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5 posted 2004-12-28 03:13 PM


Gem?, this is....WOW. truly beautiful.


Your eyes came back to me
~out of season~
butterflies of summer
from winter wander


yup, WOW!

I've missed ya too pretty laydee Nice to see you here.

This is a

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-12-28 03:18 PM


Oooooh !! Love this !!
Happy Holiday gemma !   hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-28 06:15 PM


Great write Gemma!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Snow
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8 posted 2004-12-28 06:26 PM


damn i do love reading you!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

wranx
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9 posted 2004-12-28 10:50 PM


Nice Gemma! Very!

Like Cpat, I always enjoy your take on things

ecrivan
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10 posted 2004-12-28 11:13 PM


nice bit of flavored wit incorporated here, enjoyed


passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-12-29 05:35 AM


you are the queen of free verse

love the new picture too

suthern
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12 posted 2004-12-29 11:21 AM


Beautiful work... I love this! *S*
Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-12-29 11:32 AM


"Your eyes came back to me
~out of season~
butterflies of summer
from winter wander"

Excellent excellent write Gem!!
Love the new pic as well pretty lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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