gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
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posted
2004-12-28
01:02 PM
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Your eyes came back to me ~out of season~ butterflies of summer from winter wander
a smile thawed at nothing but moving glass scenery and they danced wings on fire to stomach-pit
and it didn't matter
you weren't there
or anywhere near.
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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posted
2004-12-28
01:07 PM
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"Your eyes came back to me ~out of season~"
Freakin' A! Outstanding!
Hi Gemma!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2004-12-28
02:06 PM
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Wow gem, what Susan said... and brava...
I never have enough of time to read here in the pages of blue and am grateful for catching your work when I have time enough to linger .
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Cpat Hair
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
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posted
2004-12-28
02:38 PM
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ma'am....
your words have always been able to move something in me...
I sure enjoy reading them...
very nicely done ma'am.. very nice indeed..
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-12-28
02:42 PM
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Hi LittleOne!! ![](/pip/smiles2/wave.gif) It's so good to see you!! And, I see, you're still writing excellent and beautiful poetry!! Heart hugs, my friend,
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Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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2004-12-28
03:13 PM
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Gem?, this is....WOW. truly beautiful.
Your eyes came back to me ~out of season~ butterflies of summer from winter wander
yup, WOW!
I've missed ya too pretty laydee Nice to see you here.
This is a ![](/pip/smiles2/keeper.gif) into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. ~Sarah McLachlan~
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Nightshade
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
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posted
2004-12-28
03:18 PM
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Oooooh !! Love this !! Happy Holiday gemma ! hugs, Chris~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ Gustavo Adolfo Becquer
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*Alli4000*
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
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2004-12-28
06:15 PM
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Great write Gemma! ![](/pip/smiles/smile.gif)
~Alli~Happy Holidays!
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Snow
Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain
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posted
2004-12-28
06:26 PM
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damn i do love reading you! "so I wait for you like a lonely house till you will see me again and live in me. Till then my windows ache" p.neruda
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wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
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posted
2004-12-28
10:50 PM
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Nice Gemma! Very!
Like Cpat, I always enjoy your take on things
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ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
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posted
2004-12-28
11:13 PM
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nice bit of flavored wit incorporated here, enjoyed ![](/pip/smiles/smile.gif)
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2004-12-29
05:35 AM
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you are the queen of free verse
love the new picture too
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suthern
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
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posted
2004-12-29
11:21 AM
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Beautiful work... I love this! *S*
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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posted
2004-12-29
11:32 AM
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"Your eyes came back to me ~out of season~ butterflies of summer from winter wander"
Excellent excellent write Gem!! Love the new pic as well pretty lady~In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer.
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