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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-28 07:16 AM


Contemplation

I sit within a field of wean
And the grass is green
Grabbing at the straws I see
Drowning in a sea

I point the flash light of exist
Yet it stays a mist
Swimming towards horizons light
No beyond in sight

And time is pouring sand each day
With no light of way
I cannot swim forevermore
And can’t find the door

I sit within a field of wean
Yet the grass is green
And swim within a sea of seem
Yet it seems a dream

And yet I push this hopeless goal
To find my Noah’s Arc my soul



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-28 07:26 AM


To find my Noah's Ark, my soul...

~*~

Yes, you WOULD take 'em two by two...
off to a land
where windmills tilt
and butterflies and moths flit...

Yes, you would!




Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-12-28 07:35 AM


Sunshine
That's a sunshine answer, but it's a gray day outside today.

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2004-12-28 07:54 AM


And time is pouring sand each day
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and that sand is the land that you make your stand upon your beaches of understand.

Your rhymed contemplation is wisdom's elation.

*ww*



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-12-28 08:03 AM


JM,
Good morning sweet, have an appointment today so I posted extra early. Got your picture here walking on the beach. Did the thyroid opp do any good yet? I hope so.
Glad you are well give Randy a kiss for, well just for being there.
Winkiewinkie

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-12-28 08:45 AM


As long as the hourglass holds sand, you have time for comtemplation Sy.  Well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-12-28 08:59 AM


Excellent thoughts between the lines to ponder today Sy.
Off to pour the tea before the sand runs out.
I know!  I'll just turn the hour glass over and start it again!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-12-28 09:03 AM


Very nice contemplation...

  mornin' Sy.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-12-28 12:21 PM


scorpio
Thanks for the well done.

Nancy,
Turn the hour glass over, good idea.

Susan  
Thank you sweet.

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-12-28 05:00 PM



And yet I push this hopeless goal
To find my Noah’s Arc my soul
i guess we do, what's the alternative?



send some fla sunshine and oranges please
brr.....nj's cold today and full of snow

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-12-28 05:38 PM


inkedgoddess
May your house stay warm and your mind happy.

Margherita
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11 posted 2004-12-28 05:49 PM


And swim within a sea of seem
Yet it seems a dream


I love your contemplations, dear Seymour.
And if it actually was "a dream" and REAL is yet to be discovered ...

meanwhile your thoughts are always enriching to the reader ... so you see there IS a goal!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-12-28 08:33 PM


Margherita
Very sweet reply, thank you.

J.Samm
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13 posted 2004-12-29 04:25 AM


your words are always so full of wisdom, Sey
passing shadows
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14 posted 2004-12-29 05:27 AM


missed this yesterday because my roommate cut off my internet service...but I'm on another one

glad for the read

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-12-29 07:36 AM


J.Samm
My pleasure to have you read and reply.
Thank you

passing,
Glad you made it.

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