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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Wandering the stalest path of my inner mind... Cold wind rasps on stormy tides- and I feel you, fingertip soft against my skull... Illusion? Mayhap the mayhem has been installed? (I slept too long) Beneath sooted lashes, frozen sticky from you- I beckon this breach of insanity In purloined view of myself thru your eyes... This virginal shell- Veined in short crosses, Bonds the link of suffrage... When broken- by sentences so short I could fall from the edge If you care to invite me outside... Momentum lies heavy as I blind-grasp for grace- heavy on time? I've run out of space... space to search freely on my sentiments of you- the will to creep silent into raw interlude... But I do. I run. run from you, from outside- On soft wings of thought, and return to the sanctum of my mind, My eyes. As I sigh... and flounder for inside. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you sing the paradox: :I could fall from the edge If you care to invite me outside..." to "and return to the sanctum of my mind, My eyes. As I sigh... and flounder for inside." smiling in the knowing and happy happy you are here.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've missed reading you some time ago, I went back in the archives to read you glad you're here |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness, you have been missed. and I feel you, fingertip soft against my skull... Illusion? *shaking head* Beautiful devina, as always |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
We've been missin' round here, deTanya And here you are....out in the open And? Again you bring a present! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh......you have finally come to grace these pages of blue again gal... so good to see you... and this write? darn girl.. I felt every word of this... Hugs. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
really, really nice! I hope you are intending on posting more? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I too have missed reading you. Can't wait to read more |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great imagery and wordplay.enjoyed this alot. Jason |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Miss you old friend. Wish I had been here more often. Excellent write. And when you remember me...remember my deeds and not my words. |
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