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In Your Youth
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In Your Youth |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You wear winter like the softest petals of spring when you speak, Ahh... I swear it's summer even your tears are sweet as dew forever young, ever new you wear winter like the softest petals of spring within your love, I grow... ~tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a the softness of word and thought blend well here my friend... this is a sigh, waiting to happen.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Captain! *hugs* ~tier  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ahhhh yes, a soft sigh waiting for release very nicely done, Tier |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice Tier, such passion and love. To have a man like that would be a dream come true, would it not? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely... one can see edges and layers, here... whether they be, or just act... excellent write, Tier! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tier, this was like soft, sweet breath . . . |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Magnus, Sunshine, and Littlewing, thank you so much for your kind comments. *hugs to you all* ~tier |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can only mirror the other replies, Tier so soft, it doesn't even rustle |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha... I swear it's summer...  |
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