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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2004-12-27 04:12 PM



Nan on Vacation

Hello, Nan.
I was just thinking ...
since you live out on the Cape,
and since many take their vacations
on the Cape,
what is it like
to live on vacation?

(... So what do you do?
O, I'm on vacation.
Cool, but what do you do?
I told you.  I'm on vacation.
Okay, but don't you do something?
I just told you.
I'm on vacation.
Okay, but don't you do something after vacation?
I just told you.
After vacation I'm on vacation
after vacation after vacation
after vacation after vacation after va ... ... ....)

(so Southern Cross, is this all you sit around and do?

SC

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-27 04:23 PM



Jaime, Nan will love this!

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2 posted 2004-12-27 04:46 PM


This is hilarious! Jaime, good to see you posting today. HELLO! Talk later, before new year's eve, ok?
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3 posted 2004-12-27 08:18 PM


Ha! This made me grin!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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4 posted 2004-12-27 08:20 PM


Now that was just funny.. *looks around to see if Nan sees her laughing* Oh yea, she is on vacation. *giggles* Great piece.

Love,
Ladycat

Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups, parties, nations and epochs, it is the rule.-Friedrich Nietzsche

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