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SarBear
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0 posted 2004-12-26 06:36 PM


Another shake of your head
A feeling of disapointment
Sinking down to the bottom of my soul
The screaming never stops
Its on repeat in my mind
I'm shaking inside
My heart beating out of my chest
Fear resides far down
Hidden behind my resilience
Tears of anger only make them see
What is becoming of me
Broken promises scattered around the hillside of forgotten dreams
You don't know your effect
Only temporary feelings of regret
The burden lays on me
You jus tdo not see
Words are meaningless in a struggle against a human dictionary
All I want is an "I'm Sorry"
I can't take much more of the fakes
Want you to truly know
To feel for my heart
How black it feels
From all your risen words
Let me hear "I'm Sorry"
Not an exasperated slammed door
Again.
You've given up.

© Copyright 2004 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-12-26 09:46 PM


The screaming never stops
Its on repeat in my mind


only once did I feel this way from a disagreement/misunderstanding~~ I hope you are able to resolve these feelings

M

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3 posted 2004-12-27 07:46 PM


"Let me hear "I'm Sorry"
Not an exasperated slammed door
Again."


Wow....

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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