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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-12-23 07:37 PM


A Life
Without Suzie


What would my life
be without Suzie?

I can't imagine it,
I dare not think
of it...
       unless I must.

And why would she
       do that to me?

Yes, some have
       broken my heart.
No....thank God,
       not Suzie.


JamesLee
December23
2004

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-23 09:14 PM


I'm sure you've broken many a heart in your time James
Ericc
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2 posted 2004-12-26 07:35 PM


Nice write James!

Eric

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3 posted 2004-12-27 07:43 PM


This is very nice James!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-12-27 08:43 PM


Thank you passing shadows Ericc and Alli for responding...
Passing I truly hope now...but if I did...and perhaps I did...I am truly
sorry...not something to be taken
lightly...I hope Suzie never breaks
mine...because I want to always be
close to her...James

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