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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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another moon on the dock of hinder bay laying on it's side tied up too like the bounty and the gin sin and other ladies with smooth thigh sounds as they press their ends through the love of neon tides and wait for another sun to untie their straps and let their breasts bare bow on a morning current to anacapa or san miguel where they will nuzzle nude in a tomorrow sea's easy leather __________________ Dark |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"as they press their ends through the love of neon tides and wait for another sun to untie their straps"  nice."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Will any sun do? Or perhaps the full moon could raise the tides? Deca |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very vivid picture, you have written. Very good writing. Hugs, Ethel |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
To see with your eyes - always a pleasure- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and let their breasts bare bow on a morning current to anacapa or san miguel where they will nuzzle nude sounds heavenly will you take me there? |
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