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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-27 07:32 PM


Love on barbed wire
Dancing prickles of thin substance
Movement on a warm thread
Balancing poles apart
In full orchestra
Violins playing
Mellow

On a soft cushion
We sprang
Bouncing for every expression
In an audience
Sated

On music we themed in some idea
That was an idea
On a hot stuffy afternoon
When cool was not the rule
For anyone’s jewel
For fool

To dance any image of jewel
In the face of ridicule

We were different


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Suetang
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1 posted 2004-12-27 08:41 PM


Wonderful imagery here, Dave.  I hope you have a wonderful New Year.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-12-27 09:31 PM


Thanks Sue.

Have a Great New Year.

I seem to be in a sombre mood but something gets in my mind and I need to exercise it (on some bike of ideas).

I've followed this with Half Cast but I am just finishing off.

Take care

Dave

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