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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-27 07:13 AM

Inward Thoughts

He sits with inward thoughts these days
The look that makes his heart to fly
Looking for the polonaise
Among the hues that fill the sky

Just enough to fill his palette
Enough to stroke his mind with peace
To vote again his daily ballot
This wonder of the masterpiece

Each day it turns another page
Upon the stage where time goes bye
It turns the sky to sun or rage
To mark the age where you will lie

Each one is different in degree
It weaves a place for you to store
It is a lace of filigree
Until you reach the final door

And there you’ll find the answer to
The paradox of earthly view

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-27 07:22 AM

yes, we all need our inward thoughts

good morning Sy...glad I got to read you before I went to work

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-12-27 07:27 AM

Polonaise...three-quarter time, honored in music by the greats, music being one of the arts of genius...

as we see you...in painting, and poetry....

Good morning Sy...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-12-27 07:45 AM

passing,
Glad I was there for you before you went to work.

Sunshine
Good morning love and a

for each cheek.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-12-27 08:54 AM

"He sits with inward thoughts these days
The look that makes his heart to fly
Looking for the polonaise
Among the hues that fill the sky"

Ah yes, Polonaise..now fills my mind with beautiful music.
Care to sit by the fire and have tea this frosty morn?

Listen carefully, you can hear it too.
Morning hugs...and tea of course, Nancy~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-12-27 08:57 AM

"Each day it turns another page
Upon the stage where time goes bye
It turns the sky to sun or rage
To mark the age where you will lie"

loved that Sy!

Mornin'.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2004-12-27 09:24 AM

Seymour, you and your poetry is like a
sweet breath of fresh air! Thank you, sweet Poet!!

Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-12-27 09:40 AM

Nancy,
Morning hugs...and tea of course.

Susan,
You are a love.

Ethel,
And your replies are like a flowers odor.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

8 posted 2004-12-27 10:22 AM

Each day it turns another page
Upon the stage where time goes bye
It turns the sky to sun or rage
To mark the age where you will lie

Another keeper for my "Seymour" library.

Thankyou for this sunny morn's write.
hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2004-12-27 10:27 AM

Chris,
Your reply is my flower each day.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2004-12-27 10:41 AM

He sits with inward thoughts these days
The look that makes his heart to fly
Looking for the polonaise
Among the hues that fill the sky

Just enough to fill his palette
Enough to stroke his mind with peace
To vote again his daily ballot
This wonder of the masterpiece
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I do so love that you turn those thoughts outward in rhyme so that we can share the brilliance of your mind.

To vote again his daily ballot

yer so kewl

*winkiewinkie*

(hows that wrist doing Sybabers?)

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-12-27 11:04 AM

It is marvellous how you are able to outwardly express your inward thoughts so poetically.

May you have many, many more pages to turn in your life's book!

Love you, Sir Sonneteer!
EA

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

12 posted 2004-12-27 11:23 AM

I greatly enjoy your sense of the meaningful side of life and how you depict it.

Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

13 posted 2004-12-27 05:54 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2004-12-27 06:26 PM

JM,
And how is my busy little moth today? Did you have a busy merry Xmass? It is so nice to see you answering the blue pages. I look for you all the time but see you less and less. Winkiewinkie

Earth Angel
My hopes are the same as yours, thanks for the read and being my friend.

Ken,
It is a pleasure to read your comments.

Alli,
That's what I like to read, thank you.

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