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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Watch I watch the waters lap and fold The clouds above turn into gold The odor of the morning dew That lifts me up into the blue I revel in the dawning’s scene That seems a dream within a dream An ache that fills my heart with awe And chills my mind with primal raw I wallow in the swallow’s flight The turning and the end of night The lifting of the flowers head To wake my soul that slept like dead The glitter of the dew on green The wonder of the awesome scene The over all that fills my mind The gift each morn for humankind The variations come and go Within this garden of bestow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Sy, always a pleasure to read your wonderful rhyming thoughts in the morning.  M |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A warm way to start my day Sy. Wonderful!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Wonderful words yet again this morn. Hope you had a great day yesterday and today is just as good for you. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  Season's Greetings! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautiful Seymour. hugs, Chris  ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, It's a pleasure to write them for you. scorpio Thanks for the wonderful my friend. Nancy, Today was good.  Chris, Thank you sweet. Alli, You made my day.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful lyrical. I always discover after I read your work that my lips were moving...allowing the magic of your words to fall from my lips. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep watching and sharing what you see! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweety. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The gift each morn for humankind The variations come and go Within this garden of bestow" if only everyone took the time... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Oh, I loved this! You have wonderful imagery! The pictures come alive in my head. Nice work!! |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
It's amazing how awesome the scenery is, if only we'll take the time to "see" it. Thank you for inspiring me to look ~~! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, I like the IF. Thank you Kristabell A pleasure to read your comment. Thank you Tone of Voice, A delight to read your reply, thank you |
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