Open Poetry #34 |
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Three new senyru/haiku |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
1) Under a pale moon we hold each closer - last night together. 2) Rainsong echoes through the empty house - I miss your touch. 3) Under the new moon two cats bellow louder, then...the sirens. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Echos signs of Danger. I love the romanticism and the intensity found in your series of few but most powerful words. Thanks for sharing. -Bob |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Loneliness can inspire a lot, can't it? Well done! ![]() ~sky ![]() Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Well penned with passion and intent - Enjoyed this - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed them. |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
These are great! Nice job! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
deft weave of form.... niiiice. **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
all very finely woven! my fav is #2 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
alli, babygirl, vas and margherita - thank you all - I do appreciate your stopping by to read and comment |
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