Open Poetry #34 |
Flying To You |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Flying To You the sun is rising, winds are calm. Checking fuel, gauges ready to take flight. Towards the West I'll fly... Flying to you the one I love. Your voice my guide across blue skies. Within every cloud your face I do see. Within this heart you'll find love |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Safe trip - enjoyed this - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ella Very compact, you have found the groove..you got your game face on, now lets see more like this.. ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a wonderful way to fly. Even without wings I'm sure this would float to your love. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Towards the West I'll fly... Flying to you the one I love. Your voice my guide across blue skies." I liked that part....nice job! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I thank each and everyone of you for the wonderful comments. Still too cold to fly yet. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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