Open Poetry #34 |
an excerpt from a random life. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
and she looks up at the clock as if the world were ending her breath is cold and her hands are numb the heater is broken in her car make believe he's next to you and maybe you'll be warm she cleans schools at night for a living she needs a new car and her kids don't have proper winter clothes maybe he'll come back |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chelsea~ This undoubtly touches many in this time~ Nicely done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like this - very singular in what you have achieved Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a random life that's becoming all too common biting words here, well done |
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