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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-12-24 07:26 PM



Silent are the streets on Xmas eve
folks drive off for family dinners
except for ones with layered coats
in every other house lies a winner
losers move their shadows
off abandoned streets
onto a crowded guest hall treat
might have been a converted suburban mall
another generation has its stay of wealth

It's a silent night
creatures do stir
days run into a nightly blur
a fortunate soul chances on a town hall
doors decked in wreathes
streets further silenced that eve...

Glasses are raised to honour
there is a stranger in their midst
someone who knew to budget his crumbs
fought the hated label of deaf and dumb

It's a silent night
the stranger had no stocking
had the courage to veer towards the hall
might have been a suburban mall
fortunate to chance upon one celebration
that may be his last
time goes by so fast




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froggy
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1 posted 2004-12-24 08:45 PM


Martin,
So many voices go unspoken but through
you they are heard.

Merry Christmas my friend.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-12-25 02:55 AM


I try my best to show the ugly side of humanity here; love and understanding are missing on the grand scale of things and that is what Xmas should be about...
season's greetings and  a happy holiday too..


passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-25 08:25 AM


so true, so sad
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-12-25 09:17 AM


yes, sometimes silence is in order

nice and refreshing reflection of the materialistic overkill put to the season

ecrivan
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5 posted 2004-12-25 03:28 PM


sad to say but so many go through the motions without really wanting to..


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6 posted 2004-12-26 11:14 AM


Yes.... it may be his last -- or some day he may come to count it as his FIRST...the day when everything turned around...that happens too, though not nearly often enough.

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