Open Poetry #34 |
Where I Lay My Head |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I made my bed a rose among thorns to remind me how love though beautiful can still bleed sincerity Tonight, I am princess upon a pea of contemplation~ far this cloud drift from together to nought from love have to love sought Dawn creeps over rumpled sheets beneath sleeplessness to find your smile framed suspended in hope where I wait in que in case encased where dreams are chased in this place I made my bed a rose among thorns... ~tier |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Dawn creeps over rumpled sheets beneath sleeplessness to find your smile framed suspended in hope where I wait in que in case encased where dreams are chased in this place I made my bed a rose among thorns..." Pure poetry...pure emotion. Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Definately pure poetry Tier! Powerful, pure emotional poetry! Love it. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
thank you, dear poets... *soft smile* ~tier |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dawn creeps over rumpled sheets beneath sleeplessness to find your smile framed suspended in hope where I wait in que in case encased where dreams are chased in this place I made my bed a rose among thorns... Fantastic imagery, I could see it all. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this floats......... with lovely sentiments |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tier, this is lovely, I know exactly where you are coming from: to remind me how love though beautiful can still bleed sincerity |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write!! Awesome! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just lovely! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Beauty in a bed of thorns... Lovely write Tier! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Tier... this, I know... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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