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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-12-21 11:42 PM



Arctic hares wear white.

Canadian geese fly by.

Alaska winter.

***

snowshoes slip the slope

natives seeking spring in hope

icebergs near tundra

*

fast frozen flowers

snow laden branches bending

winter steals the warmth

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-12-22 12:38 PM


Winter time is here
For the cold is in the air
In Florida, too

  

iliana
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2 posted 2004-12-22 03:02 AM


  So much enjoyed these very visual haikus, Kacy!  *hugs* ......jo
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3 posted 2004-12-22 03:32 AM


long hours of cold nights
filling each day without you
winter's whispered winds

ice
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4 posted 2004-12-22 04:34 AM


Kacy
The first one . in my opinion is the most poetic...

The second one, a cold but beatiful scene.

The third reminds me of winter, here in the mountains of Pennsylvania...I know a place like this...a meadow coverered in thin snow, right now..bordered by hemlocks..frozen,yet some purple shows through...
The color of asters...

I enjoyed them all....:-)

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5 posted 2004-12-22 05:27 AM


yes! I love these!
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6 posted 2004-12-22 07:46 PM


Very "cool" write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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7 posted 2004-12-22 08:28 PM


thank you friends, glad you can enjoy these chillers
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8 posted 2004-12-22 09:25 PM


Kacy these are awesome!
It is chilly here too...BRRRRRRR !!  
Holiday Hugs, Chris  


Don't forget my presents!!

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9 posted 2004-12-23 08:51 AM



fast frozen flowers

snow laden branches bending

winter steals the warmth


her wee ones wander
she sips the snow the sky sends
frozen flowers float

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Beneath the northern stars
10 posted 2004-12-23 06:27 PM


A dusting of snow
Lies upon the frozen ground
Minnesota chill
*~*

It's -3 right now in MN! At least it's pretty.... Nicely done, Kacy!

~sky

Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!!

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