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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-12-21 01:59 AM

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-12-21 04:00 AM

Love the hollow along the path, and especially
how you went about it in so few words.

You have a wonderful talent and it's always a treat to read you, Snow.

Merry Christams to you good poetess~

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2 posted 2004-12-21 07:52 AM

Love it!  The connection between words and picture is outstanding!


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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-12-21 07:03 PM

This is beautiful Snow. Happy Holidays!


Happy Holidays!

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4 posted 2004-12-21 08:29 PM

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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-12-21 10:24 PM

Lucious - rich - can lose myself in the words and image - love your work


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6 posted 2004-12-21 10:26 PM

There you go raising the bar again. Wish I had half your talent Snow. Your are the most prolific writer of our times. With so few words you weave images that capture the mind and soul. Bravo dear friend. Loved it!

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West Coast
7 posted 2004-12-22 07:57 AM

layers of thought
like a lotus
on coral sand
with wind touching

one must be empty
to be filled

enjoyed this

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8 posted 2004-12-22 08:00 AM

your talent is amazing. This is so poignant, yet beautiful.  so touching.  hugs.
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just out of reach
9 posted 2004-12-22 10:34 AM

Perfect !! Holiday Hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

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Canada eh.
10 posted 2004-12-22 10:36 AM

Beautiful...beautiful....amazing pic and words.

     Season's Greetings!

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11 posted 2004-12-22 01:33 PM

I love the hint of mystery in your poetry. You write outside the proverbial box. You are a true artist ~ literally and figuratively.


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