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Sands of time
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Sands of time |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
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Written for Prince of persia sands of time ps2 i liked the game Sands of time Time, a vicious lonely storm-ridden tide Tearing throughout the wholeness of us all Caught within the currents I await the ageing of my youth Till I awake wrinkled old Regretting never letting go Those I loved but never told Time, Takes away those moments No second change is granted Should have told you let you know I loved you then and I still do And as you died upon the ground My tears fled why must time torment me! Ripping at my soul never giving me any change of hope And at the end time went back to old You were brought back to life Yet you never seemed to know The loved we shared the love we held All memories erased except my own Stuck in too deep emotion to know… Does the wise man sit and wonder why? Or always knew the answer. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
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"Time, Takes away those moments No second change is granted Should have told you let you know I loved you then and I still do" wonderful stanza...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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