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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-12-16 04:20 PM



First was your
caress...

And emptiness gathered to
your fingers.

Eager to be more.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-16 04:22 PM



Genesis...

WOW!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-12-16 04:31 PM


YES!!!!  Exquisite Eric!

     Season's Greetings!

Suetang
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3 posted 2004-12-16 05:05 PM


Eric

Once again you have relayed so very much through your words.  I wish you much love and happiness throughout Christmas and the New Year.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-12-16 08:00 PM


A magnificent rendering Eric.
What a beautiful mind you have.
TD

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5 posted 2004-12-16 09:49 PM


gorgeous!
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2004-12-16 10:48 PM


I'm reading and understanding that only the caress of a special someone enables us "to be" - it's called love.  Best wishes for the festive season.
Margherita
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7 posted 2004-12-18 03:45 PM


And what beauty was born from this initial caress!
Simply exquisite thought, dear Eric!
I love you.
Margherita

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-12-18 05:15 PM


Beautiful Eric

I'll have a go

Dave

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9 posted 2004-12-18 11:19 PM




~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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10 posted 2004-12-18 11:55 PM


Goodness, Eric, you are so good at these
small ones. One of these days I will learn how.
hugs,
Ethel


Martie
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11 posted 2004-12-19 12:02 PM


Beautiful!
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12 posted 2004-12-19 08:58 PM


Like the breath of a newborn pup,  so fresh
and so alive...

Well done Ericc...you never disappoint us.

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13 posted 2004-12-21 01:35 PM


I once told someone "I did not exist before you loved me"...

You said it infinitely better... yes! *S*

Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2004-12-27 12:32 PM


Very Cool.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
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15 posted 2004-12-27 12:36 PM


Bravo!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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