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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-12-19 01:06 AM



I've written words
too many to count
yet too few to matter
into this notebook void
all of lust and longing
and all for you

I've carried
this recorder of pain
this vessel of ink mercy
just in case
I saw anything
that brought your presence
to my mind
in case
natures beauty
brought back
recollections
of better times

But of course
words were never enough.
never enough
to explain or display
your worth to me
never enough
to sway
the eyes of a wayward heart

and still I write
carrying on this
hopelessness of possibility
throughout endless pages.
still these pages
are for you
and will remain
as long as
my words linger
on your eyes

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2004-12-19 01:18 AM


I certainly can relate to this.  Words are sometimes all we have though and not to use them would create a pressure build up prone anytime to just blow up!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-12-19 05:34 AM


I have one of those journals/records too
*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-12-19 03:10 PM


I can relate to this too.  Nice job.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-12-19 03:37 PM


Thoughtful read - well penned -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2004-12-20 01:26 PM


oh wow...

you had me at hello..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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