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Of Heart and Mind
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Of Heart and Mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Heart and Mind My heart and mind would joust again The field of honors examen Regenerate the past to date To weigh upon blind justice fate The ticking of the clock grows loud And time does weave a lonely shroud The essence of the heart would die And mind would heave a deathly sigh I cannot make the two to live Better none than one forgive So only change can make the day And birth a butterfly some way No words can light the sight of you No other sky the true of blue Perhaps within the sands of grime Change will come a final time I’ll dance this fife around the bend Another time another end |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My heart and mind would joust again The field of honors examen Regenerate the past to date To weigh upon blind justice fate ============================ and that will be the coolest verse I will read all day.  The field of honors examen i do so love your poetic mind. and for this line.... And birth a butterfly some way ya get extra winkies and twinkies.. LOL   *WW*   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 Sy, your a light in shining armor...PIP's Sir Lancelot of Words...brilliant skies this morning...thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I rushed to the computer to read your morning post.. and I was not disappointed Sy... I enjoy each and every one. they are all wonderful! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I can use all the winkies and twinkies I can get. Nice to see you replying so early in the morning. Give Randy a pat for me. LeeJ Thanks for the And I wish you the best of days.Nancy, An extra for the rush. Good morning sweet. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The ticking of the clock grows loud And time does weave a lonely shroud The essence of the heart would die And mind would heave a deathly sigh" I seriously do not know how you come up with words that work and belong together like that on a daily basis. you really rock! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your fife and drum strike up the band forever more! (Metamorphosing and coming back again and again can be quite enlightening!)  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, You are a sweet thing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I think so too. Looking forward to your friendship in the next life. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And the same to you. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I cannot make the two to live Better none than one forgive So only change can make the day And birth a butterfly some way Dear Seymour, you know that I love all your poetry with your perfect rhyme......this verse above really stood out at me. I really need to study your work. You not only have perfect rhyme and meter, but you also write each poem with so much wisdom. Hugs,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl You are a dear, thank you and happy holiday. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*just missing you* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i have missed your wise words and knowledge |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well something tells me that your heart and mind kissed and made up as this is pure perfection Sir |
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